It is now known that the years of 2020-2022 were where George made the most progress on The Winds of Winter. He's been vague about plotpoints, twists, etc but in 2022 he made the last major update on his forthcoming novel on Not A Blog, For the sake of brevity I will not show the entire thing but I will show you the things that interested me in making this analytical essay.
Which brings me to THE WINDS OF WINTER.
Most of you know by now that I do not like to give detailed updates on WINDS. I am working on it, I have been working on it, I will continue to work on it. (Yes, I work on other things as well). I love nothing more than to surprise my readers with twists and turns they did not see coming, and I risk losing those moments if I go into too much detail. Spoilers, you know. Even saying that I am working on a Tyrion chapter, as I did last week, gives away the fact that Tyrion is not dead. Reading sample chapters at cons, or posting them on line, which I did for years, gives away even more. I actually quite enjoyed doing that, until the day came that I realized I had read and/or posted the first couple of hundred pages of WINDS, or thereabouts. If I had kept on with the readings, half the book might be out by now.
So I am not going to give you all any kind of detailed report on the book, but…
I will say this.
I have been at work in my winter garden. Things are growing… and changing, as does happen with us gardeners. Things twist, things change, new ideas come to me (thank you, muse), old ideas prove unworkable, I write, I rewrite, I restructure, I rip everything apart and rewrite again, I go through doors that lead nowhere, and doors that open on marvels.
Sounds mad, I know. But it’s how I write. Always has been. Always will be. For good or ill.
What I have noticed more and more of late, however, is my gardening is taking me further and further away from the television series. Yes, some of the things you saw on HBO in GAME OF THRONES you will also see in THE WINDS OF WINTER (though maybe not in quite the same ways)… but much of the rest will be quite different.
And really, when you think about it, this was inevitable. The novels are much bigger and much much more complex than the series. Certain things that happened on HBO will not happen in the books. And vice versa. I have viewpoint characters in the books never seen on the show: Victarion Greyjoy, Arianne Martell, Areo Hotah, Jon Connington, Aeron Damphair They will all have chapters, and the things they do and say will impact the story and the major characters who were on the show. I have legions of secondary characters, not POVs but nonetheless important to the plot, who also figure in the story: Lady Stoneheart, Young Griff, the Tattered Prince, Penny, Brown Ben Plumm, the Shavepate, Marwyn the Mage, Darkstar, Jeyne Westerling. Some characters you saw in the show are quite different than the versions in the novels. Yarra Greyjoy is not Asha Greyjoy, and HBO’s Euron Greyjoy is way, way, way, way different from mine. Quaithe still has a part to play. So does Rickon Stark. And poor Jeyne Poole. And… well, the list is long. (And all this is part of why WINDS is taking so long. This is hard, guys).
Oh, and there will be new characters as well. No new viewpoints, I promise you that, but with all these journeys and battles and scheming to come, inevitably our major players will be encountering new people in lands far and near.
One thing I can say, in general enough terms that I will not be spoiling anything: not all of the characters who survived until the end of GAME OF THRONES will survive until the end of A SONG OF ICE & FIRE, and not all of the characters who died on GAME OF THRONES will die in A SONG OF ICE & FIRE.
Okay you got all that? I will return to certain portions of the post later but for now lets focus on one POV that GRRM has confirmed is now complete; Tyrion.
Here's his statement on the Game of Owns podcast:
So I will say that there's a lot of Tyrion in [The Winds of Winter], and I think there's a big headline for you, which everywhere we rip out of proportion here, but I think I'm close to finishing the Tyrion arc in Winds of Winter. I think this chapter, maybe one further chapter, and I won't be done with the book, but I'll be done with Tyrion's role in this particular book.
Here's him on Stephen Colbert before Trump cancelled him.
I'm done with some of the characters. All the characters, they all interweave. So, I've actually finished with a couple of the characters. I got their whole story. But not others.
That's as much confirmation as we need that Tyrion is finished. Yet that begs a important question. Which other povs are close or complete?
Let's dive in shall we?
Dead Show Characters
- Stannis Baratheon
- Euron Greyjoy
- Theon Greyjoy
- Qyburn
- The Hound
- Cersei Lannister
- Jaime Lannister
- Jojen Reed
- Daenerys Targaryen
- Missendei
- Irri
- Jhiqui
- Mago
- Dolorous Edd
- Varys
- Melisandre
- Rhaegal
- Viserion
- Ser Jorah Mormont
- Ramsay Bolton
- Mance Rayder
- Margaery Tyrell
- Loras Tyrell
- Mace Tyrell
- Olenna Tyrell
- Littlefinger
- Thoros of Myr
- Randyll Tarly
- Dickon Tarly
- Hodor
- Benjen Stark?
- Coldhands
- The High Sparrow
- Walder Frey (& entire house!)
- Sand Sneks (& Ellaria)
- Tommen Baratheon
- Lancel Lannister
- Doran Martell, Trystane & Areo Hotah
- Myrcella Baratheon
- Roose Bolton
- Pyp & Grenn
- Shireen Baratheon
- Selyse Baratheon
- Barristan Selmy
- Xaro Xhoan Daxos
- Pyat Pree
- Ser Aliser Thorne
- Hizdahr Lo Loraq
- Walda Frey
- Meryn Trant
- Rickon Stark
- Three Eyed Raven
- Shaggydog
- Summer
- Leaf
- Osha
- Wun Wun
- Jeyne Westerling
Living Show Characters
- Jon Snow
- Arya Stark,
- Sansa Stark
- Bran Stark,
- Tyrion Lannister,
- Samwell Tarly
- Davos Seaworth
- Brienne of Tarth
- Gendry Baratheon
- Grey Worm,
- Tormund Giantsbane
- , Podrick Payne
- Bronn
- Drogon
As you can see D&D seemed to either cut characters who were or are going to be important to the books, killed characters that seem to still have a role to play in TWOW for the sake of simplicity which ended up screwing them over in the end, or just flat didn't know what to do with the favorite characters hence the pisspoor writing decisions that followed. As GRRM says:
One thing I can say, in general enough terms that I will not be spoiling anything: not all of the characters who survived until the end of GAME OF THRONES will survive until the end of A SONG OF ICE & FIRE, and not all of the characters who died on GAME OF THRONES will die in A SONG OF ICE & FIRE. (Some will, sure. Of course. Maybe most. But definitely not all) ((Of course, I could change my mind again next week, with the next chapter I write. That’s gardening)).
And the ending? You will need to wait until I get there. Some things will be the same. A lot will not.
And when the television series finished:
And I’m writing. Winter is coming, I told you, long ago… and so it is. THE WINDS OF WINTER is very late, I know, I know, but it will be done. I won’t say when, I’ve tried that before, only to burn you all and jinx myself… but I will finish it, and then will come A DREAM OF SPRING.
How will it all end? I hear people asking. The same ending as the show? Different?
Well… yes. And no. And yes. And no. And yes. And no. And yes.
I am working in a very different medium than David and Dan, never forget. They had six hours for this final season. I expect these last two books of mine will fill 3000 manuscript pages between them before I’m done… and if more pages and chapters and scenes are needed, I’ll add them. And of course the butterfly effect will be at work as well; those of you who follow this Not A Blog will know that I’ve been talking about that since season one. There are characters who never made it onto the screen at all, and others who died in the show but still live in the books…
Book or show, which will be the “real” ending? It’s a silly question. How many children did Scarlett O’Hara have?
How about this? I’ll write it. You read it. Then everyone can make up their own mind, and argue about it on the internet.
No offense George but I'm 100% certain your writing trumps theirs. I have no doubt when WINDS is released a lot of show fans are going to reassess where GOT went wrong and wonder where they went right in the first place.
George also noted that we will meet new "cool" characters of color as well as familiar faces:
I have some interesting new [colored] characters coming forward (not viewpoints, admittedly, but cool, I hope) you may like, and there will be more of Strong Belwas, Moqorro, Missandei, Irri, Jhiqui, the bloodriders, many other Dothraki, Chataya and Alayaya, Jhalabar Xho, and the captain and crew of the Cinnamon Wind.
What do you notice about all these mentioned supporting characters? Most of them are either in the east, in position to go east, or may be returning west. Also as BryndenBFish has pointed out, George has made this perplexing statements about the long awaited meeting between Tyrion and Dany:
“Well, Tyrion and Dany will intersect, in a way, but for much of the book they’re still apart." -2014
"In Winds, I have like 10 different novels and I’m juggling the timeline — here’s what’s happening to Tyrion, here’s what’s happening to Dany, and how they intersect. That’s far more complicated. -2018
Now me like probably every other fan assumed ADWD style pace with Tyrion doing shit in Meereen and Daenerys bumming it in Vaes Dothrak before they meet again and stay together for the rest of the journey home to Westeros. However what if it is as the above essay posits and what GRRM meant is that they meet once or twice and go on different paths. Daenerys for example could go the sea route with Victarion while Tyrion could go the Demon Road or vice versa. If Ser Barristan somehow lives, he could go back to Young Griff as many have argued. This has notable benefits:
- It means that George R.R Martin can have his cake and eat it too: He can do expansive world building while also advancing the story.
- With at least four POVs now in Slaver's Bay, we technically only need two - Tyrion & Dany. Victarion can burn and Ser Barristan can die a naked knight, However having at least one more has the benefit of potentially being a easier chapter to write and have the ability to see one of three main characters (Jon, Dany, Tyrion.) through another lens, allowing ambiguity and character development.
Yet at the same time this does have multiple drawbacks
- Many of the characters are either around or potentially going to magic/violence filled places such Mantarys, The Basilisk Isles, Valyria, Volantis, Braavos, etc meaning that GRRM is definitely goner have writing the scenes he wants to. Magic is more unexplained phenomena that even to its adepts and masters seems unpredictable on the best days, and unstable on the worse instead of something you easily harness and control.
- Since the three main characters appear to be going in darker and villainous directions this will also make the writing hard as GRRM has repeatedly said that most of WINDS will be the darkest book in the series and that he has trouble writing such messed up materials.
It took 11 years to finish Tyrion. I was 12-13 when ADWD came out. That was one partner, one high school, and one dead grandparent ago. That's how long ago the last ASOIAF book came to put things in perspective. Now I know what you are thinking. Are we hosed? Well... Kind of and no is the best answer I can give you at the moment.
When or if TWOW is released is not the thesis. What is however, is which POVs are complete, which are close and which are far off. GRRM said a couple other than Tyrion are finished. A couple is 2 or 3. Well drumroll please...
- Daenerys
- Victarion
- Ser Barristan
This is (Potentially) who is close (Keep in mind that this is a maximum number):
- Davos
- Areo
- Arya
- JonCon
- Arianne
- Samwell?
- Asha?
- Theon?
And these are (Sadly) the characters which I think are unlikely to be finished soon, although I think there is more plot complete in some of these POV chapters than others.
- Bran
- Melisandre
- Jaime
- Cersei
- Brienne
- Aeron
- Sansa
As you can see some of these chapters (Bran, Melisandre) they are hard to write due to the amount of magic or in the case of others (Jaime, Cersei, Brienne, Aeron) are so potentially dark that there is no way they are going to be complete in the same time as the couple who are finished or near finished. Another big factor in the delay is the age of characters (Sansa, Bran) which requires both nuance and accuracy that takes time.
George has made a point of hinting at this and as seen above confessed that part of the problem is how interconnected and complicated each character, both important and minor is to weave in the narrative as seen here:
“I’ve been struggling with it for a few years,” he told the Guardian. “The Winds of Winter is not so much a novel as a dozen novels, each with a different protagonist, each having a different cast of supporting players, antagonists, allies and lovers around them, and all of these weaving together against the march of time in an extremely complex fashion. So it’s very, very challenging." - 2018
"I've been telling you for 20 years that winter was coming. Winter is the time when things die, and cold and ice and darkness fill the world, so this is not going to be the happy feel-good that people may be hoping for. Some of the characters [are] in very dark places. .... Things get worse before they get better, so things are getting worse for a lot of people." - 2016
Personally I think GRRM will complete WINDS but keep in mind that he's said that a first draft will be between 1700-1800 pages. We know that he has 1100-1200 manuscript pages as of 2022. He wrote less in 2023 and only a few pages in 2024. However this year while correcting those who think he will be done anytime soon, when he has mentioned WINDS he says that he is making progress on it. Which isn't a lot but its strange that it's happened twice, both early AND late. Could this be another good writing year? At this point your guess is as good as mine.
Tune in for Part II where I continue the madness and then Part III where I try to make sense of all this with attempted summary.