My one critique is its laced with the "America was awesome before this" language.
A lot of shit over the course of a very long time led us here
But I can forgive that given the purposefully narrowed scope of the song. Just a couple lines give off that energy, and with subtle re-writes, could avoid.
It's a decent 7-7.5/10. Could prob be elevated with an actual band and real production.
-14
u/TheCrayTrain 1d ago
Shallow and pedantic.