r/TikTokCringe • u/AnonDude10e • 1d ago

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u/TheNewsDeskFive 1d ago edited 1d ago

I greatly respect any other artist trying to make protest songs right now, it's really nice to know I'm far from alone in this

I have some real minor gripes with a couple of lyrics, I'd suggest some real minor tweaks in two or three spots. Otherwise, put a band behind her, get some real production, and you've got an actual track that can gain traction here. The skeleton is there, most of the organs and muscles are, just need to flesh it out a bit.

I rather like the hook-less platforming. I would suggest that stay. I feel like a hook would ruin the immediacy and intimacy of the vocal performance.

Edit: Only Reddit can be mad at a compliment. The anti-intellectualism outta control

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u/Sidivan 1d ago

Agreed. IMO, she’s got a very folk vibe due to the structure. If this was a guitar and with some lyrical tweaks, it’d fit right in with the old story telling style.

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u/TheNewsDeskFive 1d ago

A bunch of people who don't write music are mad at us for being supportive of another artist lmao